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Mechanical pencil 0.3mm 2h , 2b, 3b Kneaded eraser and Tortillon Regular pencil 8b Hahnemuhle nostalgie 190gsm size A4
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The vision was absolutely stunning i love the detail you put into the sweater and belts. it was also amazing the way you perfectly captured the texture of his shoulder pad. i was hard to believe this was a pencil drawing.
Obviously, Cloud is not your original character, and you did use a reference picture. so the originality was not that high.
You have excellent technique. the Hair looks very realistic and i can almost feel each strand from the way you shaded it. the shadows on the face and body are very natural and professionally done. the overall detail was very impressive, the emblem was perfectly drawn too. i really like the way you did his clothing to the point where i can tell that his sleeve and the shoulder pad are made of different materials.
His facial expression was a bit off, in the original Cloud had a neutral expression where is eyes looks a bit sad and regretful. whereas here, he looks kind of angry. Cloud's expression is really hard to capture because most of it comes from the eyes so you did a very good job of it. the overall impact was great, it did have a very Cloud-ish aura to it.
KEEP IT UP!
Vision was excellent. The drawing is so well detailed and very amazing. I nearly thought that this was a black and white picture from the original one!
Originality is poor since it was not your idea and you looked at the picture and drew it. Don't get me wrong. That's how most artists start off. And since not that many people have taken the time to draw this picture of Cloud, I gave it a good 2 and a half.
Technique shows how hard you worked on this picture, showing the amount of supplies you needed to complete this piece. I gave it a very good rating since the technique is marvelous.
The Impact is very well needed for five stars. It shows that you can inspire many people to draw as they see that you had accomplished this. I myself tried to draw this picture and failed miserably. XD But you took the time to complete this which shows that it can be accomplished and even inspires me to draw this picture once again.
I hope you like this critique and hope this drawing will get much more publicity!
~ChronaxDeathTheKid
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